We pitched our film to the rest of the class with Mr. Lawes and Miss O'Dell, we received the following feedback
- Make the film more self aware
- Take inspiration from things such as "real life superheroes" and parody films
- Rethink and change things about the opening sequence
Our sequence:
- The Hall Monitor entering school
- He is pulled over by a teacher who says he's taking his job too far, and he is just a hall monitor.
- He see's someone littering, pushes the teacher aside and briskly walks over to them as they run away.
- He calls over his sidekick and they both speedwalk after him
- Freeze on title screen
Here is the video recording of our treatment pitch:
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